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Re: Requesting advice.

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It looks nice, really. To me, I think you have too little on the left side. There's like a big area of just emptiness compared to the left which has hair and is a bit darker.
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Perhaps do a bit more with the background... Or a bit less, to bring focus to the foreground.
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Re: Requesting advice.

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UndeadxAssassin wrote:It looks nice, really. To me, I think you have too little on the left side. There's like a big area of just emptiness compared to the left which has hair and is a bit darker.
I was going to put my name in the space, as it would be the perfect spot for it, just havent had any luck with finding a good font.

Edit : Found one, however text is pretty much the worst part for me..tell me how it looks ;x. Image
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It would depend on what you like, but I found a really nice font on the web, it's called Aggstock. Only bad part about it is the spaces are GINORMOUS!

http://www.fontreactor.com/files/previe ... gravid.png
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UndeadxAssassin wrote:It would depend on what you like, but I found a really nice font on the web, it's called Aggstock. Only bad part about it is the spaces are GINORMOUS!

http://www.fontreactor.com/files/previe ... gravid.png


That's easy to fix. Either edit the font or when placing fonts in photoshop make a new layer for each word
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